@thebrokenspine.co.uk @alanparrywriter.co.uk #PoemsAbout #MainStage #juvenilia #typewriter This from 1983? 4? I was but young... @merrildsmith.bsky.social your piece resonated.

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John Chmura · 2 · 3d ago
Yeah, this poem hits much like @merrildsmith.bsky.social does at the end. I love the photo with annotations!!’
La Reine des Metaphores · 2 · 3d ago
Thank you. This was written in the days before spellcheckers and I only have paper copies! Some stuff from back then ended up in the bin but this one didn't.
John Chmura · 1 · 3d ago
We are the better for it!
La Reine des Metaphores · 0 · 3d ago
Thank you 🙏🙏
Jen Thorne · 1 · 3d ago
This is excellent and its so lovely to see a beautifully typed page ♥️♥️♥️
La Reine des Metaphores · 1 · 3d ago
Thank you!🙏🙏 It's a very old piece but seemed to fit the prompt.
Merril D. Smith · 1 · 3d ago
I'm pleased mine resonated! I like that final line--especially written when you were young.
La Reine des Metaphores · 1 · 3d ago
Thanks 🙏🙏 I was in my early 30s and very confused about everything ...
Merril D. Smith · 1 · 3d ago
You're welcome! We live in a confusing world.