Put Events in Time Order (writingaboutwritingaboutwriting.com)
What is the actual order of the events, as the point of view character witnesses them?
“In complex sentences with multiple clauses that relate in complex ways, the talented writer will organize those clauses in the chronological order in which those referents occur, despite the logical relation grammar imposes.” - Samuel Delany in About Writing
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